Woman's Line Notes - 10/22

Getting there…
I forgot to tell you yesterday: If I give you a note that says you missed it, and you were actually cut of (or a similar situation), it is on you to tell that person they cut you off. I was able to tell when it was obvious, but some were harder to tell, so I erred on the side of caution.

Page 7:
Juror 2: I mean, I’ve never…
Juror 1: Well, I was figuring…

Page 8:
Juror 12: Not a bad view…
Juror 10: Well, look, you’ve…

Page 10:
Juror 11: (Your line “Yes, I think…” was delivered too early)
Juror 12: I mean, he had…
Juror 9: I’m sorry. (This was switched with the next line)

Page 11:
Juror 1: Anybody doesn’t…

Page 12:
Juror 8: Nothing. I just want to…
Juror 8: There were eleven…
Juror 8: I’m not trying…

Page 13:
Juror 8: Maybe for no reason…
Juror 10: I don’t mind telling…
Juror 3: All right. It’s not…
Juror 1: Right. We have a…

Page 14:
Juror 12: Well, look, maybe…
Juror 1: OK. That means…
Juror 2: Oh. Well…
Juror 3: OK. Now, here’s what…

Page 15:
Juror 3: Right. I mean there are…
Juror 10: Just a minute…

Page 16:
Juror 8: I’d like to ask you…
Juror 1: Hey, let’s take it easy.
Juror 3: Come on. Sit down…
Juror 1: Let’s calm down now…
Juror 8: That’s right. Eight…

Page 17:
Juror 1: OK. How about…

Page 18:
Juror 1: All right, let’s stop…

Page 19:
Juror 1: Check. I forgot that. (This line was too early)
Juror 1: A kid?...
Juror 6: (You threw a line in here somewhere that belonged on page 25)
Juror 1: What? Just because…
Juror 12: No. Listen, you’re…
Juror 8: All right. I haven’t…

Page 20:
Juror 8: Maybe. It’s also…
Juror 8: I kept putting…
Juror 12: What do you mean…
Juror 12: They sat on…
Juror 2: Well, wait a minute…

Page 21:
Juror 3: We all know what it looks like…
Juror 8: He didn’t say punched… (I didn’t hear this line. If you did get it, project)
Juror 3: Switchknives. (Same at Colleen’s not above.)

Page 22:
Juror 3: You bet she is…
Juror 4: The boy talked… (Perfect except the last bit at the end after the stage direction)

Page 23:
Juror 8: I was walking…
Juror 11: I vould still…

Page 24:
Juror 1: Listen, let’s take…
Juror 8: Let me ask you this…

Page 25:
Juror 8: Do you think he lied?
Juror 3: You’re not sure about what?...
Juror 10: Listen, I don’t see…
Juror 1: OK. I think we oughta… (Missing)

Page 26:
Juror 6: You’re the only one. (This is where it goes, rather than page 19)
Juror 1: That sounds fair…
Juror 3: Secret? What d’ya mean…

Page 27:
Juror 1: OK. Let’s stop…
Juror 11: Please. I vould like…
Emily: Great cover when Paige missed her cue!
Juror 9: Thank you…

Page 28:
Juror 1: I think we ought to…
Juror 12: Looks like we’re…
Juror 12: Really? The finest…

Page 30:
Juror 8: I don’t know…
Juror 6: I’m not used to…
Juror 1: OK, let’s take seats.
Juror 6: Well, I was going to say…

Page 31:Juror 8: As far as I know…
Juror 8: Well I don’t know…
Juror 8: I didn’t bring it up…
Juror 3: Look suppose you…

Page 32:
Juror 3: He didn’t hear it…
Juror 8: That was just…
Juror 10: Sister, you can…
Juror 12: Check. And don’t…

Page 33:
Juror 8: I don’t know… (You fixed this later…)
Juror 12: All right…
Juror 1: Come on now, sit down.
Juror 1: Come on now, it’s…

Page 34:
Juror 8: What would you…
Juror 8: This. It takes…
Juror 8: All right. Now let…
Juror 8: I will. Let’s take…
Juror 8: Second, the woman…
Juror 3: All right. What…
Juror 8: Now we agreed…

Page 36:
Juror 9: It’s just that…
Juror 12: Say what you like…

Page 37:
Juror 8: But supposing…
Juror 3: Wait a minute!... (Just that first sentence and you’re golden!)
Juror 8: Well, let me… (I know you recovered from this one too, but there were still some errors)

Page 38:
Juror 8: Does he?...
Juror 8: Well, it could…
Juror 11: Pardon me, But I have… (You recovered on zeeth one)
Page 39:
Juror 3: Look – he came…
Juror 4: Well, I think…
Juror 3: Listen, you voted…
12: Well, this is…

Page 40:
Juror 3: Right! There’s…
Juror 8: Maybe. Maybe he…
Juror 10: Says he did!...

Page 41:
Juror 1: OK. Let’s hold…
Juror 1: OK. I guess…
Juror 11: Pardon. I vote…
Juror 3: Oh, now listen…

Page 42:
Juror 8: No. Ms. Foreman…

Page 43:
Juror 8: We’re not...
Juror 9: He said fifteen…
Juror 12: I don’t see (Missing)
Juror 8: Well, let’s see…

Page 44:
Juror 8: May I?...
Juror 8: His bed was…
ALL: This scene was messed up. Review ALL OF YOUR LINES on pages 44 and 45

Page 45:
Juror 8: All right, this is…
Juror 8: … twelve…

Page 47:
Juror 8: I think this is…

Page 49:
Juror 1: No. There’s…
Juror 3: Well, what are you…

Page 50:
Juror 11: Pardon. Zeeth fighting…
Juror 12: Um. If no one…
Juror 1: It’s all right with…
Juror 1: That sounds fair…

Page 52:
EMZY: Don’t forget the lights. The switch will be either just up-stage or just down-stage of the door to the hall. There will also be one on the opposite wall (Just because a lot of rooms have two switches), but hit the one stage-right.
Juror 1: Boy! Look…

Page 54:
Juror 10: Those people…

Page 55:
Juror 1: Look, would you… (Missing)

Page 56:
Juror 1: All right. Let’s stop…
Juror 8: I’d like to go…
Juror 8: According to the…
Juror 8: He remembered the…

Page 57:
Juror 8: What about the night before last?
Juror 8: And the night before that?
Juror 8: What was the second feature?
Juror 8: And you weren’t…

Page 58:
Juror 1: Listen, there’s a point…
Juror 1: What I was gonna…

Page 59:
Juror 11: For the same reason…
Juror 11: They have many uses… (The obvious, you said “men”. Also, there were a few other small errors)
Juror 2: Say, could I…

Page 60:
Foreman missed her line “Well, we’re still…” which led to everything up to and including Juror 12’s line “OK with me.” To be missing
Juror 3: Give me that…

Page 61:
Juror 8 missed her line “Are you sure?”, which caused Juror 5’s following line to be missing.

Page 62:
Juror 8: What do you think?
Juror 11: She’s right. That…

Page 63:
Juror 8: Foreman, I want…
Juror 1: OK, there’s another…

Page 64:
Juror 10: (The first half or so and the last two sentences of your monologue on this page need some work.)

Page 65:
Juror 12: Maybe if you… (Missing)
Juror 6: Ah, shut up!
Juror 10: (Just the last 3 or 4 sentences.)

Page 66:
Juror 8: It’s very hard…
Juror 4: (First two sentences of first mini-monologue.)
Juror 4: (Last half of last line on this page)

Page 67:
Juror 1: OK. There’s…
Juror 4: You didn’t want… (Missing)
Juror 3: Well, I want it now. (Missing)

Page 68:
Juror 4: I feel…

Page 69:
Juror 9: Your eyeglasses…
Juror 1: Listen, I saw ‘em…

Page 70:
Juror 3: Listen, what are…
Juror 8: There are twelve… (You recovered this)
Juror 4: No, I don’t…
Juror 8: It’s logical…
Juror 8: I don’t know…

Page 71:
Juror 3: How do you…
Juror 8: (You threw in a random “I’m don’t…”)
ALL: From Juror 8’s line, “Don’t you think…” to Juror 9’s line, “It’s eleven to one.” Were missing.

Page 72:
Juror 3: “The knife…” to “That’s the whole case.” Needs some work, as well as the last few sentences.