Wednesday, October 21, 2009

Boys Notes - Lines and blocking - 10/20

LINES MUST BE DELIVERED VERBATIM! I have given you the first few words of lines missed.

Lines:
Page 6:
Juror 7: Y'know something?... day of the year

Page 7:
Foreman: Well, I figured...
Juror 2: I mean, I never...
Juror 7: Hey, how about getting...
Juror 3: Yeah, let's get this over with...
Foreman: Well, I was figuring we'd take...

Page 8:
Juror 12: Not a bad view...
Juror 7: And what about the business...
Juror 10: And how. These hot weather...
Foreman: Let me take a look at it...

Page 9:
Foreman: Alright, gentleman. Let's take seats.
Juror 7: This better be fast...
Foreman: Well, I was thinking...
Juror 12: What was your impression...

Page 10:
Juror 7: Okay, let's get this show...
Juror 10: It's pretty tough to figure...
Foreman: All right. Now you gentleman...
Foreman: It's up to you...

Page 11:
Foreman: Anybody doesn't...
Juror 3: Well, who wasn't?...

Page 12:
Juror 10: I want to ask you...
Juror 7: So what'd you vote...
Juror 7: What, just because I voted fast?...
Juror 8: I'm not trying to...
Juror 7: Suppose we're wrong!...


Page 13:
Juror 8: Maybe for no reason...
Juror 10: I don't mind telling you...
Juror 10: What do you mean?...
Foreman: Right. We have...

Page 14:
Juror 12: Mmm? Oh. It's one...
Juror 12: I'm sorry. I have....
Foreman: We're trying to get...
Juror 12: Well, look, maybe this...
Foreman: Okay. That means...
Juror 2: Oh. Well... Well it's hard...
Juror 2: Well, sure I've heard of it...
Juror 3: OK. Now here's what I think...

Page 15:
Juror 3: Right. I mean there are...
Juror 4: It was obvious to me...
Juror 3: That's right. Did you hear that?...
Foreman: Let's go in order...

Page 16:
Juror 10: Right. This el train...
Foreman: Let's calm down now...
Foreman: That's your privilege...
Juror 6: I don't know. I started...
Juror 8: That's right. Eight o'clock...

Page 17:
Foreman: Anything else?
Juror 6: No.
Foreman: OK. How about...
Juror 7: Me? I don't know...
Juror 3: It's the kids, the way they are...
Juror 3: Yeah, well I've got one...

Page 18:
Foreman: All right, Let's stop...

Page 19:
Foreman: Now just a second...
Juror 10: Ah, stop being...
Foreman: A kid!...
Foreman: What, just because...
Foreman: Don't tell me to calm down...
Juror 12: Np. Listen...
Juror 8: Well, if you want me to...
Juror 8: All right. I haven't got anything...

Page 20:
Juror 10: What little things?...
Juror 6: You sound like you've...
Juror 8: I kept putting myself in...
Juror 12: They sat on the stand under...
Juror 12: Well, now, listen...
Juror 2: Well, wait a minute...

Page 21:
Juror 4: Good. Now suppose we...
Juror 4: After being hit several...
Juror 4: Three. This wasn't...

Page 22:
Juror 4: The boy talked...
Juror 8: No. I'm saying it's...

Page 23:
Juror 8: I was walking for a couple...
Juror 3: Listen. You pulled...
Juror 3: So what does that mean?
Juror 11: It would still...

Page 24:
Juror 3: That's right!...
Juror 7: The odds are...
Foreman: Listen, let's take seats.
Juror 7: Baloney!
Juror 9: The friend...
Juror 3: Yeah. And how long...
Juror 7: Well, he was going...

Page 25:
Juror 8: Do you think he lied?
Juror 3: You're not sure about what?...
Juror 7: Yeah. What do you think...
Juror 10: Listen, I don't see what...
Foreman: OK. I think we...

Page 26:
Juror 8: I have a proposition...
Juror 7: OK. Let's do...
Juror 10: Boy! How do you...
Juror 11: Excuse me. This...

Page 27:
Juror 5: Who does he think...
Juror 4: Just sit down...
Foreman: OK, let's stop...
Juror 11: Please. I would like...
Juror 9: Thank you. This gentleman...

Page 28:
Foreman: I think we...
Juror 12: Looks like we're really hung....
Juror 12: Anyway, I was telling...

Page 29:
Juror 3: Look, I was a little...
Juror 7: You know what the...
Juror 6: That loud, heavyset...

Page 30:
Juror 6: He's guilty...
Juror 6: I don't know you...
Juror 6: I'm not used to supposing.
Juror 2: Looks like we'll...
Juror 4: No. Go ahead...
Juror 6: Well. I was going to...

Page 31:
Juror 4: Very true...
Juror 4: If you haven't...
Juror 3: OK. It's just letting...
Juror 8: Well, I don't know...
Juror 10: Boy-oh-boy...
Juror 3: Look, suppose...

Page 32:
Foreman: He identified...
Juror 10: Brother, you can...
Juror 12: Check. And don't...
Juror 4: The woman saw...
Juror 3: Well, what have you got to...

Page 33:
Juror 8: I wonder if...
Juror 12: All right, take it...
Foreman: Come on, now....
Juror 8: Thank you. I wonder...

Page 34:
Juror 8: What would you say...
Juror 8: This. It takes...
Juror 8: All right. Now let me...
Juror 6: Well, I just finished...
Juror 6: Brother! Well, it...
Juror 8: I lived in a...
Juror 8: Second, the woman...
Juror 3: All right. What...
Juror 8: Now, we agreed...

Page 35:
Juror 8: Do you think so...
Juror 8: If he heard...
Juror 3: You're talking bout...
Juror 8: Well, I think...
Juror 6: You oughta...

Page 36:
Juror 9: It's just that...
Juror 9: No. He wouldn't...

Page 37:
Juror 8: There's another thing...
Juror 8: But supposing...
Juror 3: Wait a minute...
Juror 8: Well, let me ask you...
Juror 7: Well, it that isn't...

Page 38:
Juror 8: Does he?...
Juror 7: I'm talkin' to him...
Juror 8: Well, it could mean a lot...
Juror 7: Sure he didn't...
Juror 11: I would like...
Juror 11: There is a question...

Page 39:
Juror 4: The boy...
Juror 4: Well, I think we...
Juror 11: This then...
Juror 3: Look, you...
FROM 11's LINE "If I were..." TO 12's LINE "Well, this is just..."

Page 40:
Juror 11: Pardon. Here...
Juror 4: Two points...
Juror 8: Maybe. Maybe...
Juror 10: What d'ya mean...
Juror 10: Says he did...
Juror 10: Sure, when you...

Page 41:
Juror 10: You keep saying...
Juror 3: What are we...
Juror 3: I never saw...
Juror 2: It only...
Foreman: OK. I guess...
Juror 11: Pardon. I vote...
Juror 3: Oh, now listen!
Juror 11: I don't have to defend...

Page 42:
Juror 3: What reasonable doubt?...
Juror 7: I'm tellin' ya...
Juror 4: He said he went...
Juror 8: No Mr. Foreman...

Page 43:
Juror 5: I want to see...
Juror 8: We're not...
Juror 9: He said...
Juror 12: I don't see...
Juror 8: Well, let's see...

Page 44:
Juror 6: Listen, baseball...
Juror 10: Well, now...
Juror 8: May I?
FROM 3'S LINE "That's the story..." TO 11'S LINE "He can only..."

Page 45:
Juror 5: Well, maybe...
Juror 10: He didn't...
Juror 8: All right, here's...
Juror 11: I'd like to see it.
Juror 8: All right, this is...
Juror 8: ...twelve......

Page 46:
Juror 3: I've never seen...
Juror 11: This is, I think...
Juror 3: Come on, will ya!...

Page 47:
Juror 2: fifteen-twenty...
Juror 8: I think this is...
Juror 8: Maybe you'd like to...
Juror 3: Don't start...

Page 49:
Foreman: No. There's...
Juror 12: Well - I suppose...
Juror 2: It's getting late...

Page 50:
Juror 11: Pardon. This fighting...
Foreman: That sounds fair...

Page 51:
Foreman: Six to six...
Juror 7: And we go into...
Juror 10: Ah, Don't give me...
Juror 9: That's exactly...
Juror 11: Do you want...

Page 52:
Juror 10: Ah, Come on...
Juror 2: Now, listen, I don't...
Foreman: Wow! Look at...
Foreman: Boy! Look at it go!...

Page 53:
Juror 7: Hey, let's try to get...
Juror 3: Listen...

Page 54:
Juror 4: Five of them...
Juror 3: Now, just you...
Juror 10: Those people...
Juror 10: Why not?...

Page 55:
Juror 3: A hung jury...
Juror 10: Listen, I'll tell you...
Juror 11: I'm not in favor of this.
Juror 11: Pardon. Maybe you don't...
Juror 7: What d'ya mean...
Juror 11: Please please....

Page 56:
Foreman: All right. Let's...
Juror 8: I'd like...
Juror 4: I think...
Juror 8: According to the...
Juror 8: He remembered...

Page 57:
Juror 8: What about...
Juror 8: And you weren't...

Page 58:
Juror 9: No. But it...
Juror 10: You can...
Foreman: Y'know...
Juror 10: Now don't start...
Foreman: Listen, there's...
Foreman: What I was...
Foreman: Right...

Page 59:
Juror 11: For the same reason...
Juror 11: They have many...
Juror 10: But it can...

Page 60:
Foreman: Well, we're still...
Juror 2: Um - There's something...
Juror 2: I know they did...
Juror 2: That's right...

Page 61:
Juror 5: Too many of them...
Juror 5: Underhanded...
Juror 8: Everyone agreed that...

Page 62:
Juror 8: Do you think...
Juror 5: Not with the experience...
Juror 4: I don't think you...
Juror 8: What about you...
Juror 4: Just a minute...
Juror 3: What d'you mean...
Juror 11: He's right...

Page 63:
Juror 11: You have no right...
Juror 11: I can talk like that to you...
Juror 8: Mr. Foreman...
Foreman: OK, there's...
Juror 10: I don't understand you people...

Page 65:
Juror 10: I will like hell...
Juror 10: Now you goddamned...
Juror 2: I've heard enough...
Juror 10: How would you like me...

Page 66:
Juror 8: It's very...
Juror 4: And two...
Juror 4: Now, let's...

Page 67:
Juror 12: Well - I don't...
Juror 12: Well, it's not...
Foreman: OK. There's...
Juror 12: I'm changing my...
Juror 11: What makes you...
Juror 3: I'm the...
Juror 3: I don't anymore...

Page 68:
Juror 12: Wait a second...

Page 69:
Juror 9: Your eyeglasses...
Juror 7: Listen, will you...
Juror 9: The woman...
Juror 9: Please. Just...
Juror 5: He's right...
Juror 9: This woman was...
Juror 3: So what?...
Foreman: Listen, I saw...

Page 70:
Juror 9: Could those...
Juror 3: OK, Clarence...
Juror 8: Did you ever...
Juror 8: It's logical...
Juror 8: I don't know...

Page 71:
Juror 11: She had to...
Juror 8: Don't you think....
Juror 12: Yes. I say...
Juror 10: Yes, I think...
Juror 3: You're the worst...
Juror 2: You said we...

Page 72:
Juror 3: Well what d'ya...
Juror 3: Everything - every single...

BLOCKING NOTES
  • Casual chatting atmosphere = very good
  • "Where do you want us to sit?" - Why is it being asked?
  • Push idea of side conversations during foreman's speech like a group project kind of thing.
  • "Do you want me to list them for you" 3, say it sarcastically, degrading almost
  • 7 good "suppose this whole..."
  • 8 watch pitch patterns, vary tone of voice
  • Focus on 3 during "old man speech" 12 and 2--don't doodle
  • Pick up cues faster, esp. around 8's old woman story
  • 6 when 8 gets angry "you're a pretty smart fella..." turn and face 8 when he charges, don't just block with arm. How do you know he's coming?
  • Why does 3 use "battle"
  • Use coat rack to hang coats, etc.
  • Kathy, set up night for pps people to film show
  • Don't repeat lines when you mess up
  • Think about how your hair portrays your character
  • Jake, enter at correct time with knife
  • Good reaction to 8's knife, but react to 4 stabbing the table
  • Don't half ass a line. If you say something, say it.
  • Hayden - 28 seconds.
  • Hayden - Don't move during Zen's struggle.
  • Jake - Regiment stance
  • Nick have physical reaction so hayden has a reason to put his hand on you shoulder.
  • Drew, Aiden - good double team on Hayden
  • Lorenzo start talking as soon as you start closing window.
  • Lorenzo - why are you tellng Hayden the story?
  • Zen - nice reactin after fight with Adien
  • Anderson - "For the same reason..." Say it directly to Aiden. then stand up and give speech
  • Zen - about a foot shorter, you neeed to make it 6 inches.
  • Lorenzo - don't block audience when the stabbing happens
  • Clarence - good continuation when Drew missed his cue
  • Hayden - after Aiden's speech, wait until everyone's seated
  • PROJECT
  • Clarence - "Let him live" - cheesy
  • Don't forget jackets.

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